高考书面表达精练
【写作使命】
因为科技的快速开展和广告的大力宣扬，许多学生在学习中开端运用电子词典而扔掉了传统词典。请你根据以下提示给《21世纪报》写篇文章，比较两者的优缺陷，并宣布你自己的观念。
留意：
1. 电子词典 electronic dictionary；传统词典 paper dictionary
2. 字数120字左右。
1．【思想导航】
该篇书面表达是信件方式的议论文。经过审题，咱们知道本题的意图是经过比照电子词典与传统词典的优缺陷，从而标明自己的情绪或观念。自在表达自己的观念和定见，给学生们供给了想像空间，也使语言表达愈加自在。写信时还要留意信件的格局。此类比照论说型作文一般结构是：“长处是……；缺陷是……；我的观念。”写作内容关键如下：
① 开端语
② 电子词典的优缺陷
③ 传统词典的优缺陷
④ 自己的观念
2. 【学生习作】
试剖析如下学生习作的优缺陷，并尽量改正其间过错：
Dear editor,
Nowaday, with the rapid development of science and advertisements’ recommendation, electronic dictionary is popular with more and more sendents,① take the place of paper dictionary.
As we all know, the electronic dictionary is very small and easy to carry, which makes it convenient for us to search for what we want. What’s more, it can② make voice. However, it has its own disadvantages as well. For example, the price is③ expensive and we may damage it if we use it improperly. Besides, examples in it are not enough.
Compared with it, the paper dictionary is cheaper and contains more examples. In addition, we can keep it longer. But it’s very big and we have to spend more time④ looking for the words.
In my opinion, both have their own strengths and weaknesses. We can use the dictionary based on our different situations and make the most of it.
3. 【专家点评】
（1）整体点评
本文覆盖了表格中所供给的一切内容关键，并根据要求进行了恰当的发挥。语言表达充分、流通，也能有效地运用不同的衔接手法及较杂乱的结构和较高档的词汇，较好地达到了预期的写作意图。但文中也有些小过错。
（2）亮点或采分点
① as we all know, what’s more, in addition等连词
② ... which makes it convenient ...
③ recommendation, strengths and weaknesses
（3）过错更正
① take the place of应改为taking the place of。此为结构过错，运用现在分词短语作成果状语。
② ... can make voice应改为provide sounds。此为词语误用，voice指嗓音，sound指动静。
③ expensive应改为high。此为调配不妥，此句主语为price，“价格”应该调配“高”。
④ looking for应改为looking up或consulting或referring to。此为词语误用，look for“寻觅”，look up “查找”。
（4） 如虎添翼
① 习作顶用 ... strong recommendation也可用widespread promotion。
② ... contains more examples也可用 ...contains abundant examples。
（5）五光十色
本文有自在发挥的空间，可运用下面一些句型或短语来丰厚文章的内容，增加文章的可读性。例如：
① 在表达“查找很便利”后可加一句Stndents can get the needed information in a few seconds by pressing several keys.。
② 在最终一段的总结中，还可增加Every coin has two sides.。
4. 【参阅范文】
Dear editor,
Nowadays, a new hi-tech product, the electronic dictionary is becoming more and more popular among us students with the widespread promotion. The paper dictionary has to give way to the new one.
In the students’ eyes, the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and convenient to use. Students can get the needed information in a few seconds by pressing several keys. Some dictionanies can also provide sounds as well as written information. However, the dictionary is expensive and easy to break down. And there’re not enough examples.
Compared with it, the paper dictionary takes up too much space and usually takes the users a long time to consult. But it’s cheap and lasts long. It also provides the users with abundant examples.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, we should combine the two kinds of dictionanries and make full use of them.
Yours sincerely,
Jim.
5. 【范文背诵】
请根据如下提示词在15分钟内背下范文并于第二天早晨再朗诵并背诵一遍。
popular, promotion, give way to, easy, convenient, press, provide, expensive, break down, example, compare with, take up, cheap, last, combine.
6. 【重写作文】
请于三天后先用纸蒙住上述学生习作及范文并根据上述提示词重写作文，然后与范文进行比较和修正。 08高考书面表达剖析
怎样做好书面表达
高考书面表达思路指点
书面表达能力的培育
高考书面表达模拟题
高考书面表达精练
因为科技的快速开展和广告的大力宣扬，许多学生在学习中开端运用电子词典而扔掉了传统词典。请你根据以下提示给《21世纪报》写篇文章，比较两者的优缺陷，并宣布你自己的观念。
留意：
1. 电子词典 electronic dictionary；传统词典 paper dictionary
2. 字数120字左右。
1．【思想导航】
该篇书面表达是信件方式的议论文。经过审题，咱们知道本题的意图是经过比照电子词典与传统词典的优缺陷，从而标明自己的情绪或观念。自在表达自己的观念和定见，给学生们供给了想像空间，也使语言表达愈加自在。写信时还要留意信件的格局。此类比照论说型作文一般结构是：“长处是……；缺陷是……；我的观念。”写作内容关键如下：
① 开端语
② 电子词典的优缺陷
③ 传统词典的优缺陷
④ 自己的观念
2. 【学生习作】
试剖析如下学生习作的优缺陷，并尽量改正其间过错：
Dear editor,
Nowaday, with the rapid development of science and advertisements’ recommendation, electronic dictionary is popular with more and more sendents,① take the place of paper dictionary.
As we all know, the electronic dictionary is very small and easy to carry, which makes it convenient for us to search for what we want. What’s more, it can② make voice. However, it has its own disadvantages as well. For example, the price is③ expensive and we may damage it if we use it improperly. Besides, examples in it are not enough.
Compared with it, the paper dictionary is cheaper and contains more examples. In addition, we can keep it longer. But it’s very big and we have to spend more time④ looking for the words.
In my opinion, both have their own strengths and weaknesses. We can use the dictionary based on our different situations and make the most of it.
3. 【专家点评】
（1）整体点评
本文覆盖了表格中所供给的一切内容关键，并根据要求进行了恰当的发挥。语言表达充分、流通，也能有效地运用不同的衔接手法及较杂乱的结构和较高档的词汇，较好地达到了预期的写作意图。但文中也有些小过错。
（2）亮点或采分点
① as we all know, what’s more, in addition等连词
② ... which makes it convenient ...
③ recommendation, strengths and weaknesses
（3）过错更正
① take the place of应改为taking the place of。此为结构过错，运用现在分词短语作成果状语。
② ... can make voice应改为provide sounds。此为词语误用，voice指嗓音，sound指动静。
③ expensive应改为high。此为调配不妥，此句主语为price，“价格”应该调配“高”。
④ looking for应改为looking up或consulting或referring to。此为词语误用，look for“寻觅”，look up “查找”。
（4） 如虎添翼
① 习作顶用 ... strong recommendation也可用widespread promotion。
② ... contains more examples也可用 ...contains abundant examples。
（5）五光十色
本文有自在发挥的空间，可运用下面一些句型或短语来丰厚文章的内容，增加文章的可读性。例如：
① 在表达“查找很便利”后可加一句Stndents can get the needed information in a few seconds by pressing several keys.。
② 在最终一段的总结中，还可增加Every coin has two sides.。
4. 【参阅范文】
Dear editor,
Nowadays, a new hi-tech product, the electronic dictionary is becoming more and more popular among us students with the widespread promotion. The paper dictionary has to give way to the new one.
In the students’ eyes, the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and convenient to use. Students can get the needed information in a few seconds by pressing several keys. Some dictionanies can also provide sounds as well as written information. However, the dictionary is expensive and easy to break down. And there’re not enough examples.
Compared with it, the paper dictionary takes up too much space and usually takes the users a long time to consult. But it’s cheap and lasts long. It also provides the users with abundant examples.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, we should combine the two kinds of dictionanries and make full use of them.
Yours sincerely,
Jim.
5. 【范文背诵】
请根据如下提示词在15分钟内背下范文并于第二天早晨再朗诵并背诵一遍。
popular, promotion, give way to, easy, convenient, press, provide, expensive, break down, example, compare with, take up, cheap, last, combine.
6. 【重写作文】
请于三天后先用纸蒙住上述学生习作及范文并根据上述提示词重写作文，然后与范文进行比较和修正。 08高考书面表达剖析
怎样做好书面表达
高考书面表达思路指点
书面表达能力的培育
高考书面表达模拟题
高考书面表达精练
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