初一作文：饮食习惯
作文要求：
假设你是Mary，曾经由于喜爱吃快餐和零食， 身体很胖。 学习了本单元今后， 你改动了自己的饮食习惯，并向你的同学介绍。请参阅下列提示写一篇短文。
提示：吃太多的快餐和零食，太胖；想变瘦，改动饮食：现在早餐吃一个苹果，一杯牛奶；午饭吃一碗米饭和一些蔬菜，有时也吃点鱼或肉；晚饭吃面包和果汁。每天喝许多水。早晨训练约二十分钟。变瘦了，更健康了，很快乐。
作文范文：
Hi, I'm Mary. In the past, I was too fat because I ate too much fast food and too many snacks. After
I learned this unit, I knew fast food and snacks could give me energy, but they were not good for my
health. I wanted to be thinner, so I changed my diet. Now, I eat an apple and drink a glass of milk for
my breakfast, a bowl of rice and some vegetables for my lunch; sometimes I have a little fish or meat,
too. And I have some bread and juice for supper. I drink a lot of water every day. I exercise for about
twenty minutes every morning. I am thinner and healthier now. I'm very happy.
点评：
这篇习作句子通畅，关键完全，尤其在表达两个“太多”时，用too many润饰复数可数名词，用too much润饰不行
数名词，十分精确。作者在学习本单元后有感而发，表现了学以致用准则，是一篇不错的习作。
