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观赏动物园作文

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观赏动物园作文关键:
  周末你去上海野生动物园观赏。请依据你的观感,写一篇70词左右的短文。
  1. 有许多游客,他们给山公喂养,和山君游玩。
  2. 动物对人很友爱,咱们应该善待动物。
  3. 维护环境很重要,动物园内不要随地扔废物。
  4. 知道了维护野生动物的重要性,由于……

Shanghai Wildlife Zoo上海野生动物园

观赏动物园作文 

观赏动物园(Visiting the Zoo)

观赏动物园作文范文:
  This weekend I visited Shanghai Wildlife Zoo. There are many wild animals there. Many visitors enjoyed themselves. They gave food to the monkeys and played with the tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. We should be friendly to animals. It is important to protect the environment. We mustn't litter in the zoo. Now I know the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.

点评:
  1. 通篇文章行文连接,表达清楚,关键全面。
  2. 能正确运用时态,而且留意大小写和标点符号的运用。
  3. 发挥部分适可而止,起到画蛇添足的效果。

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