中考作文：征文竞赛

中考作文：征文竞赛
【写作要求】

校园社团在举行征文竞赛，请你依据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的文章。内容关键如下：

1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；

2. 她总是耐性倾听我的问题，并主张我怎样处理它们；

3. 作为一名医师，她常说再怎样细心也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时  

间都奉献给了作业；

4. 所以，我以为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医师。

5. 我期望 ……

要求：1. 内容须包括一切关键，句子通畅，意思连接；

2. 词数90个左右；

3. 第5点的内容需打开合理幻想，用2-3句话弥补完好。

 
【优异满分范文】

The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

My mother is the person who has influenced me most.

She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.